Okay, there were a few other things, but I should probably stop my rant there. Especially since you’ve already used this tactic in some of your other stories. And it happens right after he tells MC that he likes her. Voltage utilizes the amnesia storyline to help move along their love story. In that case, she’s a 30 year old woman with parents who give her a curfew.)Ĥ. (Compare and contrast this no-parent-around situation to the MC’s situation in the In Your Arms Tonight series. She doesn’t need to think or talk about her parents. If this MC was a 20-something year old, fine. Also, it’s all very convenient that MC doesn’t have any parents around in this story. The whole moment is finished in about 3 screens. Really, Voltage? It’s like they wrote the story, suddenly remembered that MC needs some parents, and then threw in a random situation at the end where Haru asks MC to tell him something about herself, and she randomly tells him that her parents are overseas. There is no mention of her parents at all until one of the very last chapters, where Haru asks MC a question, and she quickly says they moved overseas so that’s why she moved back. Where are your parents? While I’m reading this story, I’m scratching my head wondering why a high school student is living by herself above some random cafe. (Maybe the molester took it with him when he jumped town? Since he was fired as a molester, maybe he was considering new career possibilities.)ģ. No more mention of said survey from the MC, the boys, or the advisor. Her advisor is bothered at school about it (so much that he gives her another copy of the survey and reminds her to fill it out.) But then suddenly– any talk and pondering of the survey comes to a complete stop. The other boys seem bothered about it because they are worried about her. Haru notices that she seems bothered about it. She just doesn’t know what she wants to do after graduation, so she can’t fill it out. Throughout the first 10 or so chapters of the story, MC is emotionally bogged down by a career survey her advisor at school wants her to fill out. (Sorry molester, we don’t need you around for the plot anymore you’ve been fired.)Ģ. And then the molester disappears for the rest of the story. And yes, Haru comes just in the nick of time to rescue her. In one of the specific areas of town where she was told the molester likes to creep around. And yes, of course the MC is harassed by the molester when she just happens to be by herself. During the middle of the story, a molester decides to show up in town. And brings up issues without resolving them. The story utilizes major cliché plot points. And the sloppy way it was put together by Voltage.) (And when I say story, I’m not talking about the characters. I also like how Voltage shows memories of the MC and the boys when they were children in a few of separate chapters.
(If you want a general profile of the MC and each of the boys, go here.) I liked the general idea of the story, and I like Haru (Who can dislike someone who is just that nice?). My Opinion: This is obviously the first story from Dreamy Days I have read (because it is the first and only story released thus far). However, if you prefer someone more Tsundere or mysterious, you may find him a little boring. Overall, Haru is very likeable, especially because he is your typical “sweet, gentle, selfless” Voltage hero type. I would have thought that someone who is considered the “town’s idol” would have a more flashy personality, but I guess not in this case. …Now he’s starting to sound like a Disney Princess. He is so popular that even his teachers fight over him… Even animals love him. Haruki: Haru is the sweet, super smart boy from your past who always puts the needs of others before his own. No walk-through because both endings are available to read after you finish the story once. My review (with screenshots, some spoilers, and CGs after the jump. This isn’t a tv show (although, this story definitely felt like an asian melodrama). Will you finally get the courage to tell Haru how you feel? And what will you do about Ichigo? Does Haru even reciprocate your feelings? All this and more in next week’s episode- Hold on. And to make things more complicated, you start to notice that Ichigo, Haruki’s best friend, might like you. (Although, the fact that you are being bullied is totally his fault because you end up being bullied by jealous girls who are his fans - think of Lute from the Knights series.) You start falling in love with Haruki but feel conflicted because you do not want to ruin your friendship if he does not feel the same way about you. He helps you adjust to your new high school and even protects you from a few bullies. You find yourself drawn to Haruki, the sweet boy from your childhood. (Say what now? You sure have a way with words.)īasic Story Premise: You’ve returned to your hometown after moving away 10 years ago.
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